January 17, 2013
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Poem: The Picnic, and Life entry.
The Picnic
Beneath a Moonlit meadow, we almost made love.
Under the soft velvet lights of the willow wisps.
Forgotten in hunger pangs, left to starve on vapors
And I Searched for you.
I searched for you, but found your eyes vacant, and your kisses.... Wanting.
Like a doll, you just sat there and stared into space, eyes dead, lifeless.
Bacon Wrapped Chicken, You died to a Bacon Wrapped Chicken?
And I Remembered for you.
I remembered for you, placing my head lay in your lap, it was there that I remembered.
You fed me your fruit, and I let the juices drip down my chin, behind the giggles and smiles
Somewhere between the soft kisses and I love you's, you were lost and I have been searching.
And I Lost you.
I lost you, somewhere across the meadows, the transfer of words got lost.
They took you, ripped that cord right out of the back of your neck
You lost your connection, they stole you from me, and I remembered
That I missed you.
With the tears, I missed you.
Life: Well considering I haven't written any poetry in a long time, it isn't horrible. *Grins* I am rather out of practice though.
Mood: Disappointed
Reason: My wife is doing NTC training, for it, there is a period of time where she isn't allowed to have contact with the outside world, and they take all forms of communication away. I knew it was coming but I thought it was going to be much later in the day then it was, so I missed her last text to me, and the chance to say proper good byes. *Smiles sadly* I invited her to have a picnic with me but, between work and missing lunch she was distracted and we never got to finish. That's too bad. Oh well. I am sure I will feel better tomorrow, but she won't have access to her phone for about a month.
Me
*Frowns and stops for a moment, then spins you around, as the scenery around you spins it blurs, distorts, and changes, until you are in a soft grass in wide open meadow surrounded by majestic trees. The soft moon light from a rich full moon, spills into the area filling it with enough light to see everything, sparkling flowers glitter like stars in its presence.* Care to have a picnic with me?2:40pm
Her
Sure2:41pm
Me
*Hands you a basket and starts to set down a thick purple comforter on the grass for you*
Whats in the basket for you Lovely?
Open it up and see.
*Peers over your shoulder as you do, looking inside.*2:42pm
Her
Picnic on hold2:43pm
Me
*Grins and nuzzles your neck until you return, your eyes taking on a dead cast as if the light are out and no one is home in your Avatar*3:11pm
Her
Waiting on inspection4:17pm
Her
I see baconz wrapped chicken. Baconz and cheese fries.
Oh wait I see a spinach salad that taste like baconz.4:18pm
Me
LOLZ4:19pm
Her
Pink lemonade with just the right about of sweet and sour.4:20pm
Me
Bacon Lettuce Wraps with Tomatoes.4:20pm
Her
For dessert fat free cheese cake.4:20pm
Me
Oh, picking up where we left off.
Sorry, lost focus. *Grins*
Continue.4:20pm
Her
That doesn't taste like it.
Oh chocolate cover strawberries.
A fruit plate with seedless grapes. Cuties and pineapple.
Mangos oh the taste like heaven in my mouth.
Cantaloupes so sweet and juicy
Do you like the foods? Can you eat what I have taken out?4:24pm
Me
*Smiles* I can Love.4:24pm
Her
Oh hold.4:29pm
Me
*Starts arranging the food around the blanket and illuminates the area more with some pale flickering purple flames that float and drift around the edges of the blanket as if in some sort of soft dance.*4:34pm
Her
Beautiful.4:35pm
Me
*Smiles* I thought you would enjoy it.4:36pm
Her
Yummy foods great company.4:39pm
Me
Amazing company. *Looks fondly at you as he lays down on the blanket*4:40pm
Her
Scots closer. Putting your head on her lap.
(OCC) I will get my hair done when I am out of the army. I will always get my hair done every 6 weeks give our take.4:42pm
Me
(OOC) *Nods*
*Rests his head there, drinking in the experience*4:43pm
Her
Slowly feeding fruits4:45pm
Me
*Accepts them with a grin on his face, seductively biting into them while glancing into her eyes* mmmm I like the way the juice drips down my mouth, *He says with a slight chuckle, as he moves to dab his chin to remove the juices, then he sits up and offers you your own bite*4:46pm
Her
Nibbles on offer fruit smiling into he loving eyes.4:53pm
Her
The juices run down chin.
I want nachos when I get home.5:01pm
Me
*Leans in close and licks the juices, and before you can protest too much, kisses you*5:02pm
Her
Purrs and leans in to kiss.5:04pm
Me
*Allows it to linger for a long while, before backing off and looking affectionately upon her* I love you. *Lays his head down in her lap and starts kissing her thighs*5:04pm
Her
Oh5:05pm
Me
mmmm
I could think of some other juices I would rather have on my lips right now.5:06pm
Her
Purrs gentle pushes him off.5:06pm
Me
*Grins but lets her*5:06pm
Her
Reaches for bacon wrapped chicken.5:07pm
Me
*Chuckles* Hungry?*Smiles* We never ended up finishing the picnic. I think I will feel better tomorrow.
Comments (9)
great work on the poem
I hope you do have a better tomorrow
Even if you are out of practice you still write poetry very well.
@MyHomeIsWriting - Thank you, poetry isn't my forte but I do enjoy writing it at times. I think that is why I will never be half as good as some other Xanga Poets I know, but it isn't about that, is it. *Smiles*
@silveranstavern - It's not a contest; it's all about the connection, and people can connect with your writing.
i am glad you are still writing ...thats what counts.. now you may consider it good or bad ..read it 5 or 25 years from now and what you thought today will not matter.
@Dosmangoes - Talk about a ghost from the past. How have you been?
@silveranstavern - That was a really good poem. When I was reading it, I was thinking about something else like a tragic love story or something like that. It's been years, since I've written any poems. When I was 18-23 years old, I always wrote poems for my own catharsis and saved my stories for letting my imagination run wild. You know what I mean? LOL! Either way, I thought your poem was really good.
@RealistMe - *Smiles* I have written some that are good, that one was ok. *Winks* But I am glad you liked it. I tend to do both for catharsis, You should read my post titled The Monster. Some really catharsis going on there. *Grins*
@silveranstavern - Oh ok. I'll try to read it.
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